Question

【题目】假如你们外教想让你介绍你的两个好朋友的饮食情况，请你根据下面表格中的信息提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍他们喜欢和不喜欢的食物，并对他们的饮食情况进行评价。

名字	喜欢的食物	不喜欢的食物
Bob	鸡肉，橙子，香蕉，冰激凌	胡萝卜
Jim	胡萝卜，西红柿，梨，苹果	冰激凌

要求：60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

I have two good friends. They are Bob and Jim.

Answer 1

【答案】I have two good friends. They are Bob and Jim. Bob likes chicken very much. He likes oranges and bananas, too. After dinner, he always eats an ice-cream. But he doesn't like carrots.

Jim likes healthy food. He likes to eat vegetables and fruit every day. He likes carrots and tomatoes, and he likes pears and apples, too. He doesn't like ice-cream.

I think Jim has good eating habits.

【解析】本篇作文属于图表作文，主要介绍两个好朋友的饮食情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用了时态语态和主谓一致，特别是一些亮点词句，如very much, too, after,but等，增加了逻辑关系，增强了上下文的意思连贯性，用词准确，句子通顺。