Question

11．今年东台正在申报全国文明城市，你们学校的English Club正在举办以"创建文明城市，争做文明市民"为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下的内容提示及要求写一篇应征稿．
内容提示：◆尊敬师长，明礼诚信◆友善待人，乐于助人
◆遵守交规，不闯红灯◆保护环境
◆你的观点
写作要求：
1．文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3．词数：90词左右（开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数）．
参考词汇：respect （vt．尊敬），obey traffic rules遵守交规
Help to Make Dongtai a Civilized City
  We all know that Dongtai is applying for the national civilized city．As students，what should we do？We must respect our teachers，parents and the old．We shou ld also be polite and honest．Besides，we should help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us．It is important for us obey traffic rules，too．When crossing the streets，we should walk on the zebra crossing．We mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red．What's more，we should protect the environment．For example，we mustn't step on the grass or pick flowers．We mustn't drop litter carelessly．．
Dongtai is our hometown．Let's try our best to make it a civilized city．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈怎样创建文明城市，争做文明市民．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1尊敬师长，明礼诚信
2友善待人，乐于助人
3遵守交规，不闯红灯
4保护环境
5你的观点
常用到的重点短语：
in need 处危急中
be friendly to 对某人友好
what's more 再者
drop litter 扔垃圾
【高分句型】
1．①Besides，we should help those②who are in need and ③be friendly to the people④around us．
①besides 另外
②who are in need定语从句，关系词who做从句主语，修饰先行词those．
③be friendly to 对某人友好
④介词短语做后置定语，修饰people．
2．①It is important for us②obey traffic rules，too．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
②obey rules 遵守规则

解答 Help to Make Dongtai a Civilized City
  We all know that Dongtai is applying for the national civilized city．As students，what should we do？We must respect our teachers，parents and the old．We should also be polite and honest．（尊敬师长，明礼诚信）Besides，we should help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us．【高分句型】（友善待人，乐于助人）It is important for us obey traffic rules，too．【高分句型】When crossing the streets，we should walk on the zebra crossing．We mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red．（遵守交规，不闯红灯）What's more，we should protect the environment．（保护环境）．We mustn't step on the grass or pick flowers．We mustn't drop litter carelessly．（我的观点）．
  Dongtai is our hometown．Let's try our best to make it a civilized city．

点评 本文是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头已经给出．写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，并且要有适当的发挥，在谈到自己的观点时，要结合活动内容，写出自己的观点．