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【题目】为了使生活更美好,社会需要正能量( positive energy)。生活中,我们需要他人的帮助,也要学会帮助他人。请你在网上给“What Would You Do?"本期节目留言。内容包括:

1.你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法;

2.说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例;

3.呼吁大家互帮互助,彼此感恩,让社会充满正能量。

作文要求:1.不能照抄原文,不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;

2.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。

In the program, a customer stood up when the blind woman was cheated in the cake shop.

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【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when the blind woman was cheated in the cake shop. I am for her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.

The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until her dad arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.

In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others' help. In this way, our society will be filled with positive energy. As the saying goes. “The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine."

【解析】

本文属于话题作文,描述对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法、发生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓励大家相互帮助,并让世界充满正能量。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

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【1】【1】

A. for B. in C. with D. to

【2】【2】

A. because B. if C. but D. and

【3】【3】

A. both B. none C. either D. neither

【4】【4】

A. game B. study C. match D. housework

【5】【5】

A. during B. between C. around D. about

【6】【6】

A. how B. what C. who D. why

【7】【7】

A. play B. live C. do D. fill

【8】【8】

A. never B. already C. ever D. just

【9】【9】

A. its B. my C. his D. her

【10】【10】

A. good B. bad C. heavy D. thin

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