随着年龄的增长.我们的课外活动领域会扩大.关注点也会增多．你们学校的EnglishNewsletter 正在以My After-schoolActivites 为题举行征文活动.请根据下列表格提示的内容.用英语写一篇征文．活动关注点以前1．看电视2．-自己现在1．和家长交流2．做志愿者3．-家庭.-我们在成长.我们应该-要求:1)表达清楚.语法正确.上下文� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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1．随着年龄的增长，我们的课外活动领域会扩大，关注点也会增多．你们学校的EnglishNewsletter 正在以My After-schoolActivites 为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文．

	活动	关注点
以前	1．看电视 2．…	自己
现在	1．和家长交流 2．做志愿者 3．…	家庭，…
我们在成长，我们应该…

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
      2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
      3）词数：100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
      4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等．
My After-School Activities
As we grow，both our after-school activities and what care about are becoming more and more．
In the past，Iused to watch TV or play computer games．Sometimes I play with my friends in the playground．We just think about ourselves．But nowadays we have changed a lot．We do a lot of volunteering work．For example，we often communicate with our parents and our relatives．We often do something meaningful for our communities and our neighborhood．And we begin to think about others，especially for our parents and ourfamilies．That's all．．

分析高分句型一：
In the past I used to watch TV or play computer games．过去我常常看电视或玩电脑游戏．
used to do sth指过去常常做某事．
高分句型二：
For example，we often communicate with our parents and our relatives．例如，我们经常与我们的父母和亲戚沟通．
communicate with sb指与某人交流，沟通．

解答 My After-school Activities
As we grow，both our after-school activities and what we care about are becoming more and more．In the past I used to watch TV or play computer games．【高分句型一】Sometimes I play with my friends in the playground．We just think about ourselves．【以前的课外活动及关注点】But nowadays we have changed a lot．We do a lot of volunteering work．For example，we often communicate with our parents and our relatives．【高分句型二】We often do something meaningful for our communities and our neighborhood．And we begin to think about others，especially for our parents and our families．【现在的课外活动及关注点】That's all．

点评本文是材料作文，考生在写作之前必须认真读题，把握写作要求和写作目的．写作前最好先根据给出的提纲，写出有关的短语和固定表达备用．最后穿连起来．作文中须包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确．并恰当地运用短语和句式，注意句子开头的变化的衔接．