题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是刘梅,你的英国笔友Jack 给你写信说他最近总感觉身体不舒服。请你根据以下要点提示,写一封80词左右的回信。
提示:1.多休息,多锻炼。
2.听听音乐。
3.保持均衡的饮食(keep a balanced diet).
Dear jack,
Yours,
Liu Mei
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you are not feeling well recently. Here is some advice for you. Firstly, you should have a good rest. You shouldn’t stay up late. Go to bed earlier to get a good sleep. Secondly, you should spend more time doing exercise like running, swimming and ball games. In my opinion,you can listen to some light music to help lower your stress. Finally, I think you should keep a balanced diet. For example, you can have some fruits, vegetables and other healthy food every day. They are very good for your health.
I’m sure you’ll feel better soon.
Yours,
Liu Mei
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇信件,假如你是刘梅,你的英国笔友Jack 给你写信说他最近总感觉身体不舒服。,因此写信向你询问如何保持健康。所以要用第一人称来写,且需要用一般现在时。需要写的内容、开头和结尾已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求80词左右,写的字数不要太多,也不能太少。
写作亮点:该文使用了Firstly,Secondly, Finally等副词,使得表达非常条理清晰。文中还是要了一些固定短语如stay up late,In my opinion,keep a balanced diet,be good for,这些都为文章增色不少。