Question

【题目】书面表达。

“保护环境，人人有责”，请以How to Be a Greener Person 为题，写一篇有关环保的短文，并适当发表你的看法。（80词左右）

Answer 1

【答案】

How to be a greener person

Now all the persons in the world are talking about being more environmentally friendly, which calls on us to be a greener person. Being a greener person means that we should try our best to pollute the environment less and be more friendly to the environment, which is easier said than done. To be a greener person, we should use bicycles or public transport services rather than driving your own cars or motorbikes. We should try to recyle what we use and try not to waste them. We can also be greener by saving water and electricity and so on.Being a greener person is being friendly to the earth as well as all the human beings in the world. Try your best and we will make a difference.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求写一篇保护环境的短文。要求我们自由发挥。动笔前先要构思要点，分析体裁，确定时态；列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的从句和短语，为文章增色不少. 如: talk about谈论；call on号召；try one’s best to do sth尽力做某事；as well as也，和……一样以及有which引导的定语从句等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。