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I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature. (1·Ö)I have fun reading books and get a lot of knowledge from books. (1·Ö) Good books are good friends. (1·Ö) £¨Good books open up a whole new world to us. /It¡¯s helpful for us to have meaningful activities.) (1·Ö)
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¡¾ÌâÄ¿¡¿How are things going between you and your parents? ¡¾1¡¿ But if you are not getting on well with your parents, here is some advice.
Talk to your parents often. Children at your age begin to have your own life. You have friends at school, and you are busy doing your school work. ¡¾2¡¿ So, talk to your parents after school. You can share anything you like with your parents.
¡¾3¡¿ I¡¯m sure everyone loves their parents. But most of the Chinese children are too shy to show their love. So, when it¡¯s your mother or father birthday, send them a gift, even a card or a big hug(Óµ±§). Show your love to them.
Do your job and be responsible(¸ºÔðµÄ)for yourself. ¡¾4¡¿ They are busy every day. You are not a small kid any more. Their job is to make money for the family. ¡¾5¡¿ So do your job and be responsible for the things you do.
If you can follow my advice above, I¡¯m sure you and your parents will on well very soon.
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A. Your job is to study hard. B. Show your love to your parents. C. These days, most parents need go out to work. D. Sometimes you forget to communicate (½»Á÷)with your parents. E. If you and your parents are getting along well, congratulations! |