题目内容
【题目】书面表达
过去这一段时间我们身边的生活发生了很大的变化。请根据下面表格提供的信息,以“My Changes”为题用英语写一篇短文,向同学介绍你的变化并简要说明理由。
过去 | 1.浪费食物 2.花很多时间打电脑游戏 3.讨厌看书 |
现在 | 1.节约水和食物 2.喜欢旅行和看书 3.可以节省零花钱去买书,也可以到图书馆借书 |
原因 | 1.旅游可以帮你了解世界,享受自然之美 2.从书中获得乐趣,获得知识 3.好的书就是好的朋友,... ... (发挥一句) |
要求:1、必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并至少发挥一句;
2、词数:90词左右;
3、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
My Changes
【答案】
One possible version:
In the past I wasted a lot of food .(1分) I used to spend much time playing computer games. (1分) I didn’t like reading books at all/I hated reading books. (1分) (But now I have changed a lot. )I save water and food. (1分) I like reading and travelling. (1分)I can save my pocket money to buy books or borrow books from the library. (1分)
I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature. (1分)I have fun reading books and get a lot of knowledge from books. (1分) Good books are good friends. (1分) (Good books open up a whole new world to us. /It’s helpful for us to have meaningful activities.) (1分)
【解析】
试题分析:本文是一篇给材料的作文,让学生以“My Changes”为题用英语写一篇短文,向同学介绍自己的变化并简要说明理由。。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时和一般现在时态来写,要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点:该文语句通顺,段落清晰,表达了题目所给出的各个要点。短文用了一些短语和句式,增加了文章的色彩如:I used to spend much time playing computer games. I have fun reading books and get a lot of knowledge from books.等等。
【题目】How are things going between you and your parents? 【1】 But if you are not getting on well with your parents, here is some advice.
Talk to your parents often. Children at your age begin to have your own life. You have friends at school, and you are busy doing your school work. 【2】 So, talk to your parents after school. You can share anything you like with your parents.
【3】 I’m sure everyone loves their parents. But most of the Chinese children are too shy to show their love. So, when it’s your mother or father birthday, send them a gift, even a card or a big hug(拥抱). Show your love to them.
Do your job and be responsible(负责的)for yourself. 【4】 They are busy every day. You are not a small kid any more. Their job is to make money for the family. 【5】 So do your job and be responsible for the things you do.
If you can follow my advice above, I’m sure you and your parents will on well very soon.
根据短文内容,将A—E五个句子填入文中空缺处,使短文意思通顺、内容完整。
A. Your job is to study hard. B. Show your love to your parents. C. These days, most parents need go out to work. D. Sometimes you forget to communicate (交流)with your parents. E. If you and your parents are getting along well, congratulations! |