题目内容

13.在过去的日子里,我们曾经欢笑,也曾经哭泣…照片,或将这些精彩定格,或勾起你对往事的回忆.某英语网站向你发出邀请,请你按要求用英语写一篇文章,分享你照片背后的故事.
要求:
1.故事必须原创;
2.80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称.
参考要点:
1.描述你的照片(时间,地点,人物…);
2.分享你的故事(起因,经过,结果…);
3.谈谈你的感受(感动,怀念,影响…).

分析 【高分句型一】
I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up.我输了比赛我感到如此的伤心以至于我想要放弃.
so…that从句:如此…以至于…
【高分句型二】
But I will never forget what my father told me但是我将不会忘记我爸爸告诉我的.
what引导的宾语从句.

解答 This is a photo that is very special to me.In the photo,I was 10 while my dad looked younger.Look,we are playing ping pong happily.(描述你的照片)
I used to be a ping pong player.My dad trained me so hard,though he was tired after a day's work.Once,I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up.【高分句型一】My father said nothing,sitting quietly with me.The next morning,I found a piece of paper.It said,"Never give up,dear.I am proud of you!"(分享你的故事)
Now,I spend less time playing ping pong because of my busy study.But I will never forget what my father told me.【高分句型二】He is proud of me.How lucky I am to be his daughter!(感受)

点评 写作要抓住要点.要在"准"字上下功夫.在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面.在平时的练习中,注意多背诵范文,对于写的好的句子要进行默写,这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文.

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