Question

11．假如你是李磊，你的朋友王强正考虑今年参加去New York英语夏令营，以下是他发给你的邮件，请根据所给提示内容给他回复一封邮件．字数80---100．
Dear  Li Lei，
I'm thinking about taking part in the 2016English Camp．I know you took part in it last year．Could youplease tell me something about it？
Yours，Wang Qiang
提示内容：1．费用：35，000              2．为时两周，两名老师带队
3．景色迷人，物美价廉        4．活动既轻松又有趣
Dear Wang Qiang
                                  

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一 
There were over a hundred middle school students and two teachers有一百多名中学生和两名教师．这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
Learning English was exciting and the teachers were very friendly and helpful学习英语很有趣，老师也很友好，乐于助人．Learning English 是动名词做主语．

解答 Dear  Wang Qiang，
I took part in the 2015 English Camp．It was really a good chance to improve my English．It cost me 35，000 yuan．【要点一，费用：35，000】There were over a hundred middle school students and two teachers【高分句型一，注意there be句型的使用】，it lasted two weeks【要点二，为时两周，两名老师带队】，there were many activities which were funny and relaxing，We also visited many places of interest【要点三，景色迷人，物美价廉】．Learning English was exciting and the teachers were very friendly and helpful【高分句型二，注意动名词的使用】．This camp was a real life-changing experience that I will never forget．【要点四，活动既轻松又有趣】
Yours，
LiLei

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．