Question

【题目】 请根据所给中文提示，以“My hometown”为题用英文写一篇短文，向大家介绍你的家乡。内容如下：

1.扬州地处江苏省（province）北部，以瘦西湖（the Slender West Lake）而闻名于世。

2.扬州有悠久的历史，还有许多著名的景点。

3.扬州曾经是一个小城市，但是近20 年扬州发生了翻天覆地的变化,现在已经变成了一个现代化、受欢迎的城市。

4.如果你来扬州旅游，你可以去东关街（Dongguan Street）买纪念品（souvenir）,品尝各种当地的美味小吃。

5.最佳的旅游时间是春天,因为天气非常舒适。

6.我认为我们的家乡......

注意：1.表达清楚,语法正确，上下文连贯；

2.作文应包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

3.词数 100 左右。

Answer 1

【答案】例文：

My Hometown

Do you know my hometown? It is a small city called Yangzhou. It’s in the north of Jiangsu province and famous for the Slender West Lake. It has a long history. There are many places of interest.

Yangzhou used to be a small city, but it has changed a lot over the past 20 years. It has been turned into a modern, popular city. There are many big shopping stores, restaurants, cinemas. Green trees are on each side of the streets. All these make life in Yangzhou more comfortable and colorful. If you come here, you can go to Dongguan Street to buy souvenir and taste different kinds of local food. You’d better come here in spring and autumn because the weather is very pleasant.

I think my hometown is a good place. The life in Yangzhou is better now than before. Welcome to my hometown.

【解析】

1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求以“My Hometown”为题，根据所给出的材料信息写一篇短文。题干所给的材料中介绍了家乡的地理位置、历史文化、气候等，并要求自由发挥点评家乡。写作中要注意必须包含所给材料的所有信息，并适当发挥，语句力争简单明了，不要啰嗦，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子和短语，要保证单词拼写无误。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，行文要流畅。全文的时态为一般现在时。人称以第三人称为主。