Question

【题目】 为提升南京城市形象，我市已启动老小区出新改造工程。假设你是 Tim，请根据下面表格内容的提示，用英文向你的外国笔友 Jack 做简单的介绍。

Purpose	improve the environment
Changes to peoples life	beautiful buildings, …
Problems	lots of noise, rubbish
Your advice	…

注意：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in Nanjing.

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Answer 1

【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old communities can do what they can do to renovate our communities.

【解析】

这篇书面表达是描述老社区改造工程，话题较新。

这是篇材料作文，所给的内容要点给的比较零碎，不完整，所以考生需要结合实际情况补充完整，是文章内容充实。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。