Question

Jack是一名九年级的学生，最近迷上手机游戏，经常玩到深夜，睡眠不足，不能认真听讲，导致成绩下降。妈妈很生气，不再让他使用手机。假如你是他的朋友Tina，请你写一封信给他，建议他要合理使用手机，如查阅资料，记单词等。同时，考试在即，要理解父母、老师的心情，要主动去沟通，得到他们的原谅和帮助。
要求：
包含所给要点，语言流畅，意思连贯，适当拓展；词数80词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：become poor in study; get angry with ; communicate with; forgive.
Dear Jack，
I am sorry to hear that you quarreled with your parents about playing mobile phone games.
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
Yours，

Answer 1

Dear Jack，
I am sorry to hear that you quarrelled with your parents about playing mobile phone games.
You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep and you felt too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day. Because of these, you became poor in your study. Your mother got angry with you. You felt bad about this.
Firstly, I think you should stop playing games. You can use mobile phone to search for information, and look up new words. it is a useful tool in your study.
Secondly, you need to communicate with your parents and teachers, and let them know your problems. They will help you. at the same time ,they will forgive you for your mistakes.
I hope my suggestions are of great value to you.
Yours，
Tina

本题是写一篇给定材料的书信，写作的话题为如何合理地使用手机，具体内容包括学生使用手机所存在的一系列的问题，与父母争吵，对此提出个人的观点和建议，提出使用手机的好处，如查阅资料，记单词；同时要理解父母、老师的心情，要主动去沟通，得到他们的原谅和帮助。在写作时应注意书信的格式，同时应注意写作的内容要符合题意，要注重语言的准确性和连贯性。