Question

【题目】作文

请根据所给图片,向你朋友介绍做苹果奶昔的过程,词数不少于60。

参考词汇：苹果奶昔apple milk shake；削皮 peel；搅拌机blender

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Answer 1

【答案】Do you like drinking apple milk shake? Do you know how to make it? Now let me tell you something about it.

First, peel the apples and cut them up. Next, put the apples and ice cream into the blender. After that, pour the milk into the blender and mix them up. Then, turn on the blender for about two minutes. Finally, pour the apple milk shake in a glass and drink it.

Now you can have a try.

【解析】

写作思路：本篇作文是要介绍做苹果奶昔的过程，所以需要开篇点题，说明本篇作文的主要内容，第二段主要介绍制作步骤，第三段做最后的总结。注意中间制作步骤要有条理有次序，可以用到first…next… then…等表示次序的词。

本篇文章首先以Do you like drinking apple milk shake? Do you know how to make it?以两个疑问句的形式，以及Now let me tell you something about it.开篇点题，引出自己的主要写作内容，自然合理，简洁明了。第二段以first…next…after that…then…finally引出五个制作步骤，peel…, put…等使用祈使句，句型使用正确。最后用Now you can have a try 作为总结，顺畅自然，浑然一体。