Question

【题目】作文

请以“Mobile phone”为题写一篇英语短文。

要求：1. 词数80左右，文中不能出现自己的姓名和班级的名称；

2. 要求从手机的生产、形状、功能等等方面阐述手机的过去与现在的不同；

3. 书写规范，卷面整洁。

参考词汇：智能手机smartphone 功能 function 形状 shape 微信wechat

Mobile phone

Answer 1

【答案】With the fast development, more and more people have mobile phones. Mobile phones used to be very big, but now they get smaller and smaller. They have more functions. They are called smart phones. The smart phones bring lots of happiness to people and we can use them to do a lot of things. Such as, we can talk with each other by WeChat. No matter how far we are, we can send text messages, take photos, listen to music, read, play games and so on. It is very convenient for us to use mobile phones. But if we spend too much time on the phone, it's bad for our health. So we should use it properly.

【解析】

试题这是一篇以“手机”为话题的作文，结合写作要求把各项有条理地表达出来。根据内容提示可知本文主要运用一般现在时态，注意人称和一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中使用了used to, bring...to..., such as，no matter , send text messages, take photos，listen to, but, so等词或固定搭配，使上下文意连接紧密, 过渡自然。同时，本文最大亮点是叙事条理、表达清晰；还使用了被动语态、if引导的条件状语从句、固定句型“It’s +形容词+for sb. +to do sth.”等丰富的句型，为文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。