Question

书面表达（15分）

假如你是Jack,青少年论坛节目的主持人,昨天你收到David的来信,他有一些问题需要你给他提出有益的建议,根据以下提示为他写一封80词的回信.

.1. 早晨没有时间吃早饭,上午很疲劳,不能认真听讲;

2. 喜欢吃肉,不喜欢吃蔬菜;喜欢喝饮料,不喜欢喝水;

3. 喜欢看电视或玩电脑,不喜欢户外运动;

3. 体质很弱,经常感冒

注意字迹工整,开头和结尾已经给出.

Dear David,

It was nice to see your letter. I will give you some advice(建议).

 

 

 

 

I hope my advice can help you.

Yours,

Jack

 

Answer 1

In your letter, I learn that your body is bad and you often have a cold. I am so sorry to hear that. I think you should have breakfast in the morning. Or you will be tired all the morning and you cannot listen to lessons carefully. Because breakfast is the most important meal in a day.

Besides, you should eat more vegetables and less meat. You should drink more water and less drink. Thus you can form a healthy diet habit. What’s more, you should spend more time on sports outside not TV or computer.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: Besides, you should eat more vegetables and less meat.和What’s more, you should spend more time on sports outside not TV or computer.等句式。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。