Question

（计20分）

请根据以下提示描述一下你的好朋友, 内容要点如下:

1. John学习勤奋，成绩优秀，乐于帮助需要帮助的人。

2. 非常喜欢旅游，上周末去了扬州一日游：瘦西湖（the Slender West Lake）划船拍照,润扬大桥（Runyang Yangzi River Bridge）欣赏美景,东关街（Dongguan Street）品尝美食等。

3. 非常喜欢DIY, 昨天是母亲节，他自己制作了一些纸玫瑰，虽然看起来不是很好看，但妈妈很开心。

4. 希望参加更多这样的活动。不仅能---，还能---。

要求：1. 语法正确，意思连贯，书写规范，要点齐全；。2. 可适当发挥，词数100字左右。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

John is my good friend. He is diligent and good at his lessons. He is always ready to help the ones in trouble. He likes travelling very much. Last weekend， he went to Yangzhou for a one-day tour. He went to the Slender West Lake. There he went boating, took photos and had a good time. He went to the Runyang Yangzi River Bridge to enjoy the view and went to the Dongguan Street to taste the food. He is fond of do-it-yourself. He made some flowers by himself. Although it is not so beautiful，his mother was very glad. He wants to take part in more activities like this，for this would not only save some money but also would give him some practice.

【解析】

试题分析：根据所给材料可知这是提纲类作文，动笔前首先阅读所给材料，确定写作内容。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文包含了所有要点，能围绕内容要点适当发挥，内容具体、丰富。应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。层次清晰，语言地道，主题鲜明，内容翔实，格式正确，结构紧凑。使用了一些比较好的字句。比如：be good at擅长；be ready to准备做某事；have a good time玩得高兴；be fond of喜欢；take part in参加；not only……but also不但……而且等。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用， 让文章更出彩。

考点：考查提纲类作文