Question

根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

提示词语：假如你叫李华，最近和美国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论各自的老师，他想了解对你影响最大的老师。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：influence (影响 v.), good, kind, friendly, help, teach

 

Answer 1

Hi, Jim! I’m glad to hear from you.

I have many favorite teachers, but I think Mr Wang influences me most. He is a tall, handsome looking man with large glasses. He is kind and always smiles to everyone but sometimes he is strict. At first I was not good at English. He often helped me when he was free. Little by little, I found it interesting and easy and I caught up with my classmates. Last month I got the highest grade in our English test. It is Mr Wang who saved me in my English lesson and I’ll never forget him.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题解析：此题要求根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。主要考查写作能力，也是对英语综合知识运用的考查，这就要求仔细分析所给提示，不要漏掉提示要点，可适当发挥，写出语言流畅，意思连贯的文章。

【亮点说明】这篇文章语言连贯，简洁明了，叙事清楚，条理分明。在文章中使用恰当的复合句，为文章增色不少，同时也体现出作者的写作功底。如：He often helped me when he was free.（他有空的时候经常帮助我）；It is Mr Wang who saved me in my English lesson and I’ll never forget him.（就是王老师在英语课程方面挽救了我，我永远不会忘记他）等。

考点：提示性作文