Question

【题目】假如你是陈丽，你的英国朋友Peter想了解中国的传统节日。请根据提示词，以“The Mid-Autumn Festival”为题用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文。

提示词及要点：

1.one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals

2.get together, have a big dinner

3.in the open air, admire the moon, enjoy the mooncakes

4.carry people’s wishes to families they love and miss

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Answer 1

【答案】The Mid-Autumn Festival

To Chinese people Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals. It falls on every 15th of the 8th month in Chinese lunar calendar, when the moon is said to be the brightest and fullest of a year. Mid-Autumn Day is a time for family reunion. On that night, the entire family will usually get together around a table to have a big dinner, then enjoy the moon cakes in the open air and admire the moon.

Mid-Autumn Festival is a festival for families to gather and celebrate their reunions. It carry people’s wishes to families they love and miss.

This is the Mid-autumn Festival in China．I hope you'll like it．

【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如to Chinese people，one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals，in Chinese lunar calendar，get together，around a table，have a big dinner，enjoy the moon cakes，in the open air，admire the moon等。同时并列句On that night, the entire family will usually get together around a table to have a big dinner, then enjoy the moon cakes in the open air and admire the moon.和I hope you'll like it./ It falls on every 15th of the 8th month in Chinese lunar calendar, when the moon is said to be the brightest and fullest of a year.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。