题目内容
【题目】 以My Ambition为题写一篇短文。想想你最喜欢什么职业,请把你将来想做的工作写出来,并写明理由,60------80 词左右.
【答案】
My Ambition
My ambition is to be a doctor. First I can work in tall buildings, Then I can help people who are sick. I think it’s an interesting job. That’s a big goal. I don’t think it is easy to be a doctor. To be a doctor, I’ll need to learn a lot at school. I’m a good student, but I can be better. I’ll work hard to improve myself. I’m sure I can make my dream come true.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇命题作文。本文所给材料比较简单,要求写出自己将来想做的工作,并写明理由。因此动笔前要认真挖掘题目内涵,勾勒要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时和一般将来时,主语是第一人称。写作中注意时态的变化及主谓一致问题,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了一般现在时和一般将来时,文章脉络清晰,自然流畅。同时,使用了一些常用的句式和短语,这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累,背诵一些常用句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
【题目】_____Its old meaning is used to express a temperature that is a little bit cold. As the world has changed, the word has had many different meanings.
______When you see a famous car in the street, maybe you will say,“It’s cool.” You may think,“He’s so cool,”when you see your favorite film star.
You can use “cool”instead of many words such as“new”or“surprising”.______A teacher asked her students to write about the mountain they had visited. On one student’s paper was just the one sentence,“It’s so cool” ______
But the story also shows a scarcity(缺乏) of words. Without “cool”,some people have no words to show their feelings. ______ I can. And I think they are also very cool.
根据材料内容,将A—E五个句子填入文中空缺处,使短文内容完整、正确,并将其标号填写在下面题号后的横线上。
A.Can you think of other words that make your life as colorful as the word “cool”? B.May he thought it was the best way to show what he saw and felt. C.“Cool”is a word with many meaning. D.Here’s an interesting strory we can use to show the way the word is used. E.“Cool”can be used to express the feeling of interest in something |