Question

请根据以下提示以On Sunday 为题介绍Peter的周末生活。70词左右。

提示词：get up, after breakfast, go to the park by bike, fly a kite, go boating on the lake, have lunch in a restaurant, cook supper, watch TV, go to bed, have a good time

On Sunday

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Sunday

On Sunday, I always get up early in the morning. After breakfast, I sometimes help my mother do some housework. After we have lunch，we go to the zoo together. We all enjoy ourselves there. My mother and I like to go home by bike. After supper, I do my homework and watch TV. I go to bed early at night.

【解析】

根据所给材料可知这是一篇命题作文，动笔前首先根据主题组织材料，确定写作内容。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文包含了所有要点，能围绕内容要点适当发挥，内容具体、丰富。应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。层次清晰，语言地道，主题鲜明，内容翔实，格式正确，结构紧凑。使用了一些比较好的字句。比如：get up起床；help sb do sth帮助某人做某事；go to bed去睡觉等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。