Question

假设母亲节即将来临，请你借此机会给你母亲写封信（ 不少于８０词 ），和她谈谈心里话。

要点：

１、母亲辛勤工作，目的是让我过上更好的生活，受到更好的教育

2、平时，母亲把家里打理得井井有条，节假日，带我出去玩乐

3、母亲经常与我沟通交流，在学习上对我严格要求，成绩不理想时，鼓励我不放弃；在生活中，遇到困难时，叫我要笑对生活

表达对母亲的感谢与祝福

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Mother’s Day is coming. I，d like to say something to you.

You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You often make our house clean and tidy. When we have holidays ,you often take time to go out with us .You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at life.

You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!

Happy Mothers Day!

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。要求在母亲节来临之时给母亲写一份信。信的内容包含两个主要方面的内容，一是，母亲为我所做的一切，二是表达对母亲的感激和祝愿。具体的材料已经给出，写作时主要条理清晰，语句通顺。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。

考点：表格作文。