Question

【题目】书面表达

每个人都有自己的梦想和理想，为了理想而努力可以成就一个人的事业。请根据提示内容，以“My Dream”为题，写一篇英文短文，向同学们介绍一下自己的梦想。

要求：1.参考提内容，可适当发挥

2. 语句通顺，意思连贯， 书写工整

3. 文中不得出现任何真实（姓名、校名和地名等）；

4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）

My Dream

Everybody has his dream. My dream is to be________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】My Dream

Everybody has his dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up.I really like writing becauseit is amazing to share my thoughts and feelings with others.

To realize my dream,I’m going to study Chinese hard. It’s very important for me.I am going to read a lot.There are so many great writers that I can always learn a lot from their works.What’s more,I plan to keep on writing so that I can improve my writing through practice.

All in all,I know it is not easy to realize my dream but I will try my best and never give up.

【解析】

本文是一篇话题作文。请根据提示内容，以“My Dream”为题，写一篇英文短文，向同学们介绍一下自己的梦想。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。