Question

【题目】根据图示，将它们编写成一个有趣的故事，并将你的推测写进故事中，120词左右。

2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：land, man, UFO, alien, chase, must，could/might，can't

My neighbour John lives alone. He had an unbelievable experience three days ago.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My neighbor John lives alone. He had an unbelievable experience.

Three days ago, a huge UFO suddenly landed in front of his house. There might be something visiting him. Then a short alien got out of the strange UFO and knocked at John's window. He was too scared to move away. After a moment the door opened little by little. He saw an ugly alien walking up to him. It can't be a human being. “Help! Help！” John cried loudly, running out of his house. Many neighbors were woken up by the scary noise. The alien noticed him at once. It was chasing after the poor man. At that moment, the rain poured down. Everything disappeared when John turned back. There could be something strange around us.

Do you believe it or not？

【解析】根据题目要求，可知本文属于图画作文，首先需要理清几幅图画之间的脉络关系，找出有趣所在，主旨主题所在；文章主要讲述了作者一个邻居突遇飞碟和外星人的有趣故事。然后确定文章所使用的时态，语态，人称；文章使用一般过去时态，第三人称为主。接下来需要确定文章的段落，文章主要由三个段落组成，第二段讲述了大部分内容；注意头脑风暴出即将用到的句型，短语，连词；最后整理成文，并检查修改。