Question

【题目】书面表达

请以“My friend”为题，根据下面的表格提示，介绍一下你的朋友。

Name	Kitty
Profile	12 years old, come from England live in Beijing , in Grade7
Appearance	long hair, tall and slim, wear glasses
Hobbies	like reading, sports, music, be good at swimming
School life	walk to school, favourite subject is．．．

要求：1．文章须包括所有要点，并进行适度拓展。

2．词数70词左右。

3．注意标点和大小写。

My friend

Answer 1

【答案】

My friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Kitty. She is 12 years old. She comes from England. She lives in Beijing with her parents. She is in Grade 7. Kitty is a tall and slim girl. She has long golden hair. She often wears a pair of glasses. She has many hobbies. She likes reading, doing sports, listening to music, especially swimming. She is very good at it. Every day she walks to school, her favorite subject is Chinese.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的好朋友吉蒂。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Her name is…，She is....，And she has....，She can....等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要介绍我们经常互相帮助。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友叫凯特，接下来介绍凯特的长相和喜好，最后指出我们互相帮助。此处come from, like doing sth, live in, a lot of，be good at等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。