Question

【题目】书面表达

今天你和同学一起去了美术博物馆。请写一篇日记, 描述你们此次活动的内容和你的感受。

要求：

1. 意思连贯. 语句通顺. 时态正确。

2. 60词左右。

April 9th

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Answer 1

【答案】April 9th

Today it was sunny and warm. I went to the art museum with my classmates. The bus was so fast and it only took us half an hour to get there. The museum was big. There were lots of great paintings in it. I was really interested in them, but the guide told us not to take photos of them. Then the guide told us some stories about the paintings. They were interesting. All in all, it was an exciting day.

【解析】本文属于话题作文，描述去美术博物馆的活动内容以及感受。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如with, so, it takes sb 时间to do sth, lots of, be interested in, take photos, exciting以及all in all等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。