题目内容
2.假设你是李明,你的笔友Peter来信谈到他所居住的城市,并希望了解你家乡无锡的情况,请你用英语写一封回信.内容提示如下:1无锡位于中国东部,因太湖(Tai Lake) 而出名;
2由5个区组成,如梁溪区(Liangxi District)、滨湖区;
3过去许多工厂经常向湖里倾倒废弃物,最近政府已经采取措施减少污染;
4每天我们都能看到一大群游客;每年来无锡的最好的时间是春天;
5我希望…
注意:1短文须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2第5要点内容共须用2~3句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
3词数80个左右,短文的开头和结尾句已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Peter,
It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city.Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
分析 这篇作文叫小作者介绍Peter 所居住的城市.句子要完整,表达准确,注意时态的变化和主谓一致.文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性.
高分句型:
①Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi.现在我想告诉你一些关于我家乡无锡的事情.句子中would like to do sth表示想做某事.
②I'm looking forward to hearing from you.我期待着收到你的来信.句子中look forward to doing sth表示期待做某事,后面跟动词的ing形式.
解答 Dear Peter,
It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city.Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi.(高分句型)(引出话题) Wuxi lies in the eastern part of China.It is famous for Tai Lake.It is made up of five districts such as Liangxi District and Binhu District.(无锡的地理位置及组成)In the past,many factories put its waste into the lake.Recently the government has taken action to reduce pollution.(无锡过去及现在)Every day we can see a large group of visitors here.The best time to visit Wuxi is (in) spring.(大量游客在春天来游玩)I hope you can come and visit soon.I'll show you around it.I'm sure you'll have great fun.(我的希望)
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.(高分句型)(我的期待)
Yours
Li Ming
点评 这篇作文结构清晰完整,表达准确流利,要点齐全.文中有一些好的表达方式如It is made up of five districts such as Liangxi District and Binhu District.Many factories used to put its waste intothe lake.等等.
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