Question

【题目】书面表达

在我们的成长道路上，不论是与朋友还是父母、老师之间都会有一些美好回忆。这些回忆包含了多少美好的故事！请以“A story between ______ and Me”为题，写一篇英语短文。

提示：1.补充题目；

2.表达你的感受。

要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2.词数80左右。

A Story between ______ and Me

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Answer 1

【答案】A Story between Mark and Me

I still remember what happened between my best friend Mark and me.

When I was in Grade Eight, I just got a pen as my birthday gift from my father. I liked it very much. I showed it to my best friend, Marl. He asked me to lend it to him. Although I wasn’t willing to do so, I still lent it to him because he was my best friend. But the next day, he told me that the pen was broken when he did homework with it. I got very angry at that time. I didn’t talk to him the whole day.

Finally, I chose to forgive him. Because I thought nothing was more important than friendship. What’s more, I became very happy after I forgave him.

【解析】

本文是一篇话题作文，要求以“A story between ______ and Me”为题，写一篇英语短文，回忆自己在成长道路上，不论是与朋友还是父母、老师之间的一些美好回忆。首先要补充完整题目，确定主题，然后围绕主题展开写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。