Question

7．英语课上，同学们正在准备举行以"真实的自我"为主题的演讲活动．请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲词，向同学们介绍一下自己．
提示：（1）What are your strong points？
（2）How do you improve yourself？
（3）What is your dream for the future？
注意：1．短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3．词数：80个左右．（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）
     Hello，everyone!
     I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself．                               
     Thanks for your attention!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Every day I play basketball with my classmates after school．每天放学后我和我的同学一起打篮球．
play basketball with sb和某人打篮球
after school放学后
句型二：
I am reading English everyday，taking notes carefully in class，keeping English diaries and so on．每天都读英语，上课认真做笔记，写英语日记等等．
take notes 记笔记
keep  diaries 写日记
and so on等等

解答 Hello，everyone!
     I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself．I like sports．Every day I play basketball with my classmates after school．【高分句型一】I also enjoy listening to the music．But my favorite subject is  English．I am reading English everyday，taking notes carefully in class，keeping English diaries and so on．【高分句型二】（优势）To reach my dream，I will work hard to enter a good normal university to equip myself with relevant knowledge such as psychology，education theory and teaching kills．（如何让提升自己）I believe I will become a good English teacher through efforts．In a word，developing good habits is very important to English learning．（未来的梦想）
     Thanks for your attention!

点评 能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．