Question

根据下面图示，充分发挥想象，请你代表九(1)班全体学生向张老师推荐Jack为学生会主席。因为Jack具有以下品质：

要求： 1．短文必须包括提示内容，并适当增加细节(根据形容词，必须用相应的行为动作进行描述)。

2．尽可能用本单元所学的语法和句型。

3．字数90左右，短文开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr Zhang

We are writing to recommend Jack as our new chairperson of the Students Union. We think he has many qualities for this position.

Jack is confindent and is not afraid of making speeches in front of many people. He is clever. He has won several physics competitions, but he is modest and never shows off. Jack is very organized. He plans his study and work very well. He is creative. He always comes up with good ideas for our school activities.(He is always ready to help others, so he is welcome in our class.) We think jack is the most suitable person to be the chairperson of Students’ Union. I hope you agree with us.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态，本文用的是一般现在时。文章主要给老师提出一些建议，所以在写作时，要尤其注意描述人物特征的表达方式。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: is not afraid of making speeches , shows off, comes up with，还有注意了and 和but 等连接词的用法。另外文章还用到了宾语从句。 学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。