题目内容
【题目】书面表达：
时间飞逝，转眼间同学们进入九年级已有三个多月了，在繁忙的学习生活中，我们有困惑、泪水；也有进步、喜悦。请根据以下提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。注意：要点表达齐全，可适当发挥。词数100左右。
学习生活 | 老师 | 工作认真；充满爱心；……（自由发挥1-2点） |
学生 | 课上：认真听讲；尊敬老师 | |
课后：互相帮助，按时交作业 | ||
课余生活 | 因为太多的作业，没有足够的时间从事业余爱好. | 电视：每周一次或两次观看自己最喜欢的节目。男生喜欢……，因为……；女生喜欢……，因为…… |
体育运动：每天锻炼半小时，如：…… | ||
音乐：在课间欣赏，大多数人喜欢听……觉得它……（自由发挥1-2点） | ||
愿望 | 通过努力，每个学生能取得更多的进步；……（自由发挥1-2点）。 | |
Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than two months since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, _____________________________________________________________________
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Because of too much homework, we don’t have enough time to do our hobbies. Though we are busy with our study, we still live a colourful life. _______________________________
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As a Grade 9 student, I hope___________________________________________________
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【答案】
It is more than two months since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, our teachers work carefully. They all have a heart full of love. Though they are strict, they care about every student. We students listen to the teacher carefully in class. We respect the teachers very much. After class, we help each other and always hand in our homework on time.
Because of too much homework, we don’t have enough time to do our hobbies. Though we are busy with our study, we still live a colourful life. We watch our favourite TV programmes once or twice a week. Many boys like watching sports programmes because they think these programmes are exciting. Many girls like watching documentaries because they can learn a lot about nature, history and real-life events from them. We also do sports for half an hour every day, such as running and playing ball games. What’s more, we enjoy music during the break. Most of us like listening to classical music because it can help us relax.
As a Grade 9 student, I hope we can make more progress in our study through hard work. And I believe that we can enter the ideal high school successfully next year.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍九年级学生的校园生活，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Many boys like watching sports programmes because they think these programmes are exciting. Many girls like watching documentaries because they can learn a lot about nature, history and real-life events from them.等，Because等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
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