题目内容
【题目】书面表达。
推荐Sam为新的电脑俱乐部的主席,可适当增加些内容,不得少于80字。
1.他是九年级一班的学生。
2.他喜欢电脑、足球和篮球。
3.他很聪明,经常在考试中取得好成绩。
4.他很乐于助人,总是帮助需要帮助的人。
5.他很友好,很容易交朋友。
【答案】
Dear sir,
I will recommend Sam as the chairperson of computer club. I think he will be an excellent chairperson because he has all the excellent personal qualities.
He is a student of Class One, Grade Nine. He knows much about computer and he likes playing computer games, too. He can help us solve the problems when we are using computers. He is also interested in playing football and basketball.
I think he is very smart. He often gets high marks in the tests, He is a top student in our class . He is so excellent that everyone in our class wants to be his friends.
He is also very warm hearted in our class. He always helps other students when they need help. He is so helpful that everyone likes him very much and is thankful to him for his help.
He is also easy-going and active in all the school activities.
I think Sam has all the qualities to be a good chairperson. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely
Tom
【解析】
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