Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是阳光中学九年级学生李平。你的英国笔友Henry向你请教成语“守株待兔”。请你给他写一封邮件, 内容包括： (1) 描述故事；(2) 概括寓意。

注意： (1) 词数90左右。(2) 邮件中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。

下图供参考。参考词汇：野兔（hare）；树桩（tree stump）

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

In ancient China, there was a farmer. Though he worked on his farm, his harvest could only support his own life. The farmer wanted to change his life, but he was too lazy to work hard every day.

One day, something amazing happened. The farmer was working on the farm. Suddenly, he heard a strange noise. He looked around and saw a little hare under a tree stump. It ran too fast so it bumped into the tree stump and died. The farmer was very happy, and he took the rabbit home and cooked a big meal. From then on, he didn’t work any more. He waited near the tree stump for hares day after day until he died. Obviously, he was not so lucky. Moreover, because nobody took care of the crops in the field, they all died.

This story tells us we should not always follow the past experience, we should fix new problems with new ways. Also, it warned us never to expect to gain without working.

【解析】

该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。承接短文开头；第二段叙述“守株待兔”这一故事；第三段概括故事寓意并结尾。注意：1. 根据作文要求，使用第三人称来叙述故事内容。时态采用一般过去时为主，用过去进行时描述场景。2. 描述故事时，要用场景描写，故事发生的背景、起因和过程要交代清楚。3. 根据写在内容，可以采用work hard、bump into、from then on、day after day、depend on、come from等短语；使用there be、until和while引导的时间状语从句，too…to…、so…that…、not…any more等句型和结构。