Question

17．回顾初中三年成长过程，你一定有很多感受．假设你将代表你校2011年毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，发言稿的内容如下：

回 顾	美丽的校园、生动有趣的课堂、三年来在学习、生活方面的收获
感谢	老师的教育、父母的支持、同学的帮助
祝愿	考生自拟，至少两点

注意：1．词数80左右．发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
2．发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺．不能照抄A部分原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名．
Good afternoon，ladies and gentlemen，my dear teachers and fellow graduates，
It is a great honor（荣誉）for me to make a speech on behalf（代表）of the graduating class of 2011．
                  ．
Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It's lucky for us to study at such a beautiful school．
句中使用句式为"it is+形容词+for sb to do sth"，其中"it"为形式主语，代指不定式短语"to study at such a beautiful school"．这句话意为：对我们来说，在这样一个美丽的学校学习很幸运．
高分句型二：
They often give us a hand when we have difficulties．
句中"when we have difficulties"为时间状语从句，句中短语有"give sb a hand 帮助某人"．这句话意为：当我们有困难的时候，他们经常帮助我们．

解答 Good afternoon，ladies and gentlemen，my dear teachers and fellow graduates，
     It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2011．（开篇点题）
     It's lucky for us to study at such a beautiful school．【高分句型一】All our teachers always do their best to make lessons lively and interesting．They often give us a hand when we have difficulties．【高分句型二】Classmates are getting on well with each other．In the past three years，we have taken part in many activities and learned a lot．We could hardly succeed without our teachers'efforts，our parents'support and our classmates'help．At this moment，I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us．（表达感谢）
    Finally，I hope our school can be more beautiful and our friendship can last forever．（表达祝福）
    Thank you for listening．

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．