Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是学校的小记者，对竞选校学生会主席之一的刘浩进行了采访。请根据以下采访记录，给学校写一篇关于刘浩的推荐信。

注意:1.短文必须包括上述所给内容，可作适当发挥:

2.词数:90词左右(文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数);

3.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to recommend Liu Hao as the chairperson of the Students’ Union.

I will be happy if he can be the chairperson.

Yours sincerely,

Simon

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to recommend Liu Hao as the chairperson of the Students’ Union.Liu Hao was born in Suzhou in January 2004. He is tall and thin. And he wears glasses. He studies hard and is good at physics.

He is kind-hearted. Last week our classmate Tom fell off his bike and broke his leg. He often carries him to the classroom. And he helps him with his homework.

He loves reading. He often goes to the school library to read books and he often talks with us about the books he has read. He's crazy about DIY. He makes New Year’s cards by himself.

When he grows up, he wants to be a social worker. He will try his best to preach about the importance of protecting the earth

I will be happy if he can be the chairperson.

Yours sincerely,

Simon

【解析】

这是一篇材料作文，也是书信作文。假如你是学校的小记者，对竞选校学生会主席之一的刘浩进行了采访。请根据以下采访记录，给学校写一篇关于刘浩的推荐信。首先注意格式正确。本文人称主要第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时。短文必须包括上述所给内容，可作适当发挥。字数应在90词左右。应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

尊敬的先生/女士：

我想推荐刘浩为学生会主席。刘浩2004年1月出生于苏州。他又高又瘦。他戴着眼镜。他学习刻苦，擅长物理。

他心地善良。上周我们的同学汤姆从自行车上摔下来摔断了腿。他经常背着他去教室。他帮他做家庭作业。

他喜欢读书。他经常去学校图书馆看书，他经常和我们谈论他读过的书。他热衷于自己动手。他自己做新年贺卡。

当他长大后，他想成为一名社会工作者。他将尽最大努力宣扬保护地球的重要性。

如果他能担任主席，我会很高兴的。

谨上，

西蒙