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【题目】回顾三年的初中生活,父母的教诲与支持始终伴你成长,使你进步。那些发生在你与父母之间的故事,看似平淡却值得回味与珍藏。请以 “The Story of My Progress (进步)” 为题,写一篇文章。

参考要点:1. 描述初中阶段,你与父母之间的关系(亲密,疏远…)

2. 讲述一件发生在你与父母之间的事情(起因,经过,结果…);

3. 谈谈你的感受(感动,怀念,影响……)。

要求:1. 故事必须原创;

2. 120词左右;

3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

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【答案】My progress has connected with my mother.

Three years ago,I was a shy girl.I was afraid to speak in public.My mother was worried about that.One day,my mother heard that a speech competition would be held in my school.She encouraged me to take part in the activity.At first,I was shocked by her advice,but I did not want to let her down,so I agreed.During that period,my mother often took me to the park to practice. I still remembered that day clearly.When I won the first prize,my mother smiled happily.

Now I am an outgoing and confident girl.Thanks to my mother's encouragement and company,I have made such great progress

【解析】

这篇文章属于一篇记叙文,需要回顾一件与父母相处的往事,要写清楚整个事件的原委,包括起因经过结果,通过这个故事来表达自己取得的一些进步,父母带给自己的影响以及自己内心的感动。写作的时候需要注意正确使用过去时态。举个例子,可以讲一下自己小时候不愿意在公共场合讲话,学校将会有一场演讲比赛,妈妈鼓励我参加活动,并且为我提供帮助,带我去公园练习,最后获得了奖项,最后自己变得非常自信,表达对妈妈的鼓励和陪伴的感谢。用到的短语及表达可以有:speak in public 在公共场合说话,worried about 担心,encouraged me to 鼓励我去做…,take part in the activity 参加活动,was shocked by 被…震惊,let her down让她失望,encouragement and company 鼓励和陪伴,made such great progress取得如此大的进步。

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