Question

【题目】书面表达（满分15分）

假设你是Sandy，请根据下面的要点向校长写一封推荐June的信。

我想推荐June获今年的青年奖（This year's Youth Award ）。她聪明,她很擅长电脑，经常从互联网上获取信息，她是个考虑周全的女孩，她能把每件事都计划得好好的。她善良且乐于助人，上周，一个五岁的女孩在超市找不到父母，哭的很伤心，她把帮助她找到了父母。女孩父母亲对她充满感激。我们都认为她应该得这个奖，希望早日收到回信。

1. 词数80左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）。

2. 内容必须包括以上要点并进行合理拓展；

Dear principle:

I would like to recommend June for This year's Youth Award.___________________________

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Yours faithfully

Sandy

Answer 1

【答案】

I would like to recommend June for this year’s Youth Award. She is very clever. She is good at computer and often searches for information through the Internet. She often comes up with good ideas for class. We like her. She is organized. She can plan everything very well. And she never forgets the things she needs to do.

She is helpful. Last week, a five-year-old girl can’t find her parents, and she was crying in the supermarket. June saw her and took her to the police station . She played with her until her parents found her. The girl’s parents was very thankful to her.

She is also hard-working and careful. For example, she always does extra work after class. She can find out the things the others don’t pay attention to. We all think she should get the award and we are looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely

Sandy

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如She is good at computer and often searches for information through the Internet. She can find out the things the others don’t pay attention to. We all think she should get the award and we are looking forward to hearing from you soon.

等等。