Question

13．在英语课上，同学们就白己喜欢的旅游方式展开了讨论．请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈白己的想法．

方式	观点
团队旅游	有导游，不会迷路；不必自己找旅馆； …．（考生自拟）
个人旅游	自由安排时间，选择自己喜欢的旅游景点 …（考生自拟）
你的想法

注意：
1．文章必须包括表中的全部内容，可适当增加细节；
2．词数90左右．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
参考词汇：travel with a group团队旅游；travel alone个人旅游；arrange安排
Recently，we have discussed the different ways to go traveling．Here are the results．Some students choose to travel with a group． With a guide's help，they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels by themselves．Besides，they can make friends and help each other while traveling．However，other students prefer to travel alone．That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite sights．What's more，it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．
For me，I'd like to travel alone，I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like．In this way，I can enjoy my vacation better．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是汇报关于自己喜欢的旅游方式的讨论结果，并且谈谈自己的想法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1团队旅游：有导游，不会迷路．不必自己找旅馆．结识朋友，相互帮助．
2个人旅游：自由安排时间．选择自己喜欢的景点．学会照顾自己．
3．自己的看法
常用到的重点短语：
with one's help在某人的帮助下
get lost 迷路
look for 寻找
make friends交朋友
what's more 再者
look after照顾
spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事

【高分句型】
1．①Besides，they can②make friends and help each other③while traveling．
①besides另外
②make friends交朋友
③while traveling省略句，完整表达while thay are traveling．
2．①What's more，②it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．
①what's more 再者
②it是形式主语，后面的to learn to look after themselves．是真正主语
3．For me，①I'd like to travel alone，I want to ②spend enough time visiting the places③I like．
①would like to do sth想要做某事
②spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事
③I like是定语从句，修饰先行词places，关系词which做宾语省略．

解答 Recently，we have discussed the ways to go traveling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide's help，they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels by themselves．Besides，they can make friends and help each other while traveling．（团队旅游）【高分句型】However，other students prefer to travel alone．That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite sights．What's more，it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．【高分句型】（个人旅游）  
For me，I'd like to travel alone，I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like．【高分句型】In this way，I can enjoy my vacation better．（自己的看法）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头．我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点．不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．要注意主谓一致等问题．写作中要适当使用连词，例如本文中的besides，however，what's more等等注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．