题目内容
5.老师请你写一篇有关你的同学Tom的英语文章,内容须包含以下要点:•你们已经同学两年,你非常了解他.
•Tom过去和现在的变化(外貌和性格各取一描述)
•Tom做过的一件好事( 可以自己写,也可自下图任选一件).
•给Tom提出一至两条建议.
•要求:1.词数70词左右;2.准确运用时态,表达流畅.
•开头已给出.
Tom is a 14-year-old boy.
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分析 高分句型一
he always helps others when they are in trouble.当人们有困难的时候,他经常帮助他们.这是when引导的时间状语从句,当…时候.
高分句型二
I think he should do more exercise.我认为他应该多做运动.这是一个宾语从句,I hthink 是主句,后面的是宾语从句.
解答 Tom is a 14-year-old boy.We have been classmates for two years,I know him very well【要点一,和Tom同学两年,非常了解他】.He used to be short and shy,but now he is tall and outgoing.【要点二,过去和现在的变化】He is helpful,he always helps others when they are in trouble.【高分句型一,注意时间状语从句的使用】Yesterday he helped an old man cross the street.He studies hard but he doesn't like doing sports【要点三,做过的一件好事】.I think he should do more exercise.【高分句型二,注意宾语从句的使用】.【要点四,建议】
点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but,so,then等.
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