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【题目】书面表达。

Mike是一位中学生,他沉迷于电脑游戏中,并因此影响了学习。你(Jim)作为Mike的好朋友,你打算怎么帮助他呢?请用下面所给的提示写一篇短文。

提示:give up; waste time; be interested in; have a great time

要求:1. 短文中必须包含所给提示词,可适当发挥;2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等;3. 词数80左右。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

Thanks for your letter. I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now.______________

Yours,

Jim

【答案】Dear Mike,

Thanks for your letter. I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now. I want to help you.

I know you are interested in playing computer games, but if you spend too much time on it, you can’t concentrate your attention on your studies. It will affect our studies badly. And we can’t make good grades. So I think you must give it up. It is a waste of time. You must put your put your heart into your studies. Only if we study well, can we have a bright future. Also,you can develop other good habits ,such as reading and doing sports and so on.

I hope my advice is good for you and you can feel good soon.

【解析】

试题这篇短文是一篇话题作文,你的好朋友Mike沉迷于网络游戏,影响了学习,你以Mike好朋友的身份,给他写信,帮助他解决这个问题。这篇作文的开放性的,如何帮助Mike,该怎么解决这个问题,这些内容都需要我们自己补充完整,并且用正确的英语表达出来。通过分析可知,这篇短文我们需要使用一般现在时态,第一人称来书写。短文的主体应放在给Mike的建议上。关于如何改变这种情形,我们可以从我们的真实生活出发,结合我们的生活实际。我们的生活中也许就有这样的同学,如果是这样的话,你该如何劝解他,改掉这个坏习惯,把心思重新都放在学习上来。写作时还需要注意表达的连贯和流畅,多使用平时积累的好的短语和句型。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文,短文中作者根据题目要求,以Mike好朋友的身份,给他分析了沉迷于网络游戏的坏的影响,并且给他提出了好的建议。首先作者先点明了Mike目前的情况,I know you are interested in playing computer games, but if you spend too much time on it, you can’t concentrate your attention on your studies. It will affect our studies badly. And we can’t make good grades.接下来作者给出了自己的观点,So I think you must give it up. It is a waste of time. You must put your put your heart into your studies.还提出了自己的建议,you can develop other good habits ,such as reading and doing sports and so on。短文中作者使用了条件状语从句、倒装、宾语从句、固定短语搭配等,这些句式使短文的意思连贯流畅,增强了文章的表现力。

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