题目内容
【题目】最近,你们班级就“普通人去太空旅游”的话题展开了讨论。请你根据下列表格的提示以 “The advantages and disadvantages of Space Travel”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的观点。
Advantages | Disadvantages |
1. 提供新居住场所。 2. 更好了解太空。 3. …… | 1. 花费大。 2. 有危险。 3. …… |
你的观点:…… | |
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要 求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;?
3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
The Advantages and disadvantages of Space Travel
There are several advantages of space travel.
【答案】There are several advantages of space travel. First of all, it could provide man with new places to live in and new sources of energy. In addition, space travel helps people understand the universe better. Also space travel research does good to other research fields.
However, space travel also has some disadvantages. It uses up too much money which could be spent in other ways. What’s more, the idea of man living on other planets is unrealistic. Space travel could be dangerous, too.
In a word, though there are the disadvantages, I think space travel is a good thing. It is important for man to learn about the universe.
【解析】本文属于话题作文,要表达普通人去太空的优点以及缺点,并阐述自己的见解。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如first of all, provide sb with sth, in addition, also, do good to, however, use up, what’s more, in a word以及it is adj for sb to do sth等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。