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【题目】书面表达(共1题,计10分)

假如你是张敏,你的家乡是杭州,请向你的朋友们介绍一下你的家乡杭州吧。

要点:1.杭州是一个美丽的城市,空气清新;2. 它以西湖(the West Lake)而出名;在杭州可以买到许多漂亮的衣服;3.它离上海不远,坐汽车大约需要两个小时;4.欢迎朋友们来杭州,希望大家能玩的开心。

要求:1.语句通顺连贯,符合题目中的要点; 2. 80词左右。

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【答案】

Hello, I am Zhangmin. My hometown is Hangzhou. It is a beautiful city and the air is very fresh there. It is famous for the West Lake. Many visitors come to the West Lake every year. You can buy a lot of beautiful clothes there. Hangzhou is not far away from Shanghai. And it takes about two hours to go to Shanghai. Welcome to my hometown and hope you can have a good time here.

【解析】

试题分析:这篇作文要求我们以张敏的身份,介绍一下自己的家乡杭州。题目中给出了我们写作的具体内容,因此我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来即可。通过审题可知,这篇作文我们应该主要使用一般现在时态,第一人称来叙述。注意语言要合乎英语的表达规范,不要遗漏要点。而且我们应尽量使用好的句型和短语,如因…而出名,我们可以用短语be famous for,这样可以增加文章的表现力。结合使用一些连词,使文章整体意思连贯,表达流畅。

写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的范文,作者按照题目的要求介绍了自己的家乡。首先这篇作文内容完整,意思连贯。作者介绍了自己家乡杭州是个美丽的城市,以及它有名的地方,还提到了跟上海的距离。其次这篇作文中使用了正确的时态和人称,短文都用一般现在时态,句子表达合乎语法规范。最后短文中用到了比较好的句型和句式,如It is famous for the West Lake、Hangzhou is not far away from Shanghai. 、And it takes about two hours to go to Shanghai、 Welcome to my hometown and hope you can have a good time here等。

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【题目】I often hear some students say English is difficult, and it gives them a headache. So they can’t learn it well. But English is very easy for me. I’m good at it. I’m very glad to tell you something about how I study English.

First, I think an interest in English is very important. When I was in Grade One, we had a new subject —— English. It was fresh for me . I was interested in it, so I worked hard at it. Soon we had an English exam and I got a very good mark. How happy I was! After that, I learned English harder and harder. Our English teacher often teaches us English songs, the songs sound nice. I often think how interesting English is!

Second, I think English is a foreign language. I should learn it well in the following ways: Listen to the teacher carefully, speak bravely, read aloud and have a good vocabulary. Then practice again and again, never be tired. And I also have a good habit: Asking whenever I have a question, I must make it clear by asking our English teacher. How happy I am when I understand!

Besides this, I often read English stories, jokes and easy novels. From these I know English is not only interesting, but also useful. They help me understand a lot of things. So to do more reading is an important way to learn English well.

And I also do some exercises from our class magazines, and I often write English diaries. English has become a close friend of mine.

Now I have learned English for more than two years. I always keep the first position in our school. From these words, I hope every student can learn English well.

1Why do some students often “have a headache”?

A.Because they are easy to catch a cold.

B.Because it’s often very cold

C.Because they think English is easy.

D.Because they don’t think English is easy.

2The writer tells us that we should be ___ in English if we want to learn it well.

A.kind B.interested C.angry D.strict

3The sentence “I got a very good mark” means ________.

A.I got a good way

B.I had a good idea

C.I did badly in the exam

D.I did well in the exam

4The writer thinks English is interesting because ________.

A.English is full of stories

B.English is full of jokes

C.his teacher often teaches them nice English songs

D.of nothing

5Which of the following is not the way the writer studies by?

A.Speaking bravely.

B.Writing to foreign friends.

C.Reading aloud.

D.Writing English diaries.

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