Question

9．假如你是李红，最近和美国笔友Mary通过邮件谈论各自的同学关系，她想了解你是如何与同学和睦相处的．请你根据她的问题回复邮件．
提示词：play basketball，listen to music，help，relaxed

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．时态以一般现在时为主；人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从三个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：①在班里有多少个朋友②和朋友们一起做什么③和朋友一起感觉如何
重点短语：
1．in my spare time在我的空闲时间
2．talk about the famous singers 谈论著名歌星
3． the whole day 一整天
高分句型：
1．We are good at different subjects，so we can help each other to solve different problems．
我们擅长不同的科目，所以我们可以彼此帮助解决不同的问题．（be good at 擅长，后面跟名词或动名词）
2．And my friends make me realize having friends is really a happy thing．
我的朋友使我认识到拥有朋友真的是一件开心的事情．（句式make sb．do sth．使某人做某事）

解答 Dear Mary，
   I'm glad to hear from you．And I'm happy to tell you something about my friends and me．I have four friends in my class．（在班里有多少个朋友）And I do a lot of things with them in my spare time．I often play basketball with my friends after school．Playing basketball helps me to know how to work with others．Sometimes I listen to music and sing songs with my friends．Also，we talk about the famous singers and the words of the songs．It makes me feel relaxed after the whole day study．Of course，we study together．We are good at different subjects，so we can help each other to solve different problems（和朋友们一起做什么）（高分句型）．
   When I stay with my friends，I always feel happy because we can learn from each other and help each other．And my friends make me realize having friends is really a happy thing．（和朋友一起感觉如何）（高分句型）．
   What do you often do with your friends？Write and tell me．
   Yours，
                                                             Li Hong

点评 解答这种题目时，我们应该仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点． 要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写． 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯． 在平常的学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．