Question

书面表达 (本大题共5分)

学校将举行初中英语征文比赛，主题是介绍你的朋友Nick，请你根据下列要点完成征文。

1. 勤奋而有耐心，总是乐于助人，经常帮同学辅导数学难题。

2. 我7岁时就跟他交上了朋友。

3. 他愿意替我保守秘密，所以我什么都可以告诉他。

4. 他痴迷于自己动手做，他喜欢修坏了的东西。

5. 他妈妈的生日要到了，他决定……

注意：

1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2. 第5 要点的内容须用1～2句话作适当发挥；

3. 词数70个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。

My best friend Nick is a lovely boy with a good personality.

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How lucky I am to have such a good friend！

Answer 1

My best friend Nick is a lovely boy with a good personality. He is hardworking and patient. He is always ready to help others. He often helps classmates with Maths problems. I made friends with him when I was 7 years old. He is willing to keep secrets for me, so I can tell him everything. He is crazy about DIY. He likes repairing broken things. His mother’s birthday is coming. He decided to make a birthday card for her by himself. He thinks his mother is sure to like it..

How lucky I am to have such a good friend！

【解析】

试题分析：这篇文章叫小作者介绍自己的朋友，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的文章的内容。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如He is willing to keep secrets for me, so I can tell him everything. He thinks his mother is sure to like it.. How lucky I am to have such a good friend！等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理.

考点：考查提纲类作文。