Question

【题目】书面表达：（15分）

昨天是母亲节，你为妈妈做了一道水果沙拉。根据参考词汇，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你制作水果沙拉的过程。词数在80个左右。

1. Wash different fruits and peel(剥皮);

2. Cut them and mix them up(混合);

3. Add salad, cream and stir(搅拌)

Answer 1

【答案】

Yesterday was Mother’s Day. I made a dish of fruit salad for my mom. First, I took an apple, a pear, some purple grapes, an orange and some bananas. Then I washed and peeled them. After that I cut them into small pieces and put them on the plate, and then I added some sugar, a little salad and some cream. The last thing I did was to stir and mix them up. I put the purple grapes around the plate, and my fruit salad looked more beautiful. After I finished my fruit salad, I put it on the table and sang some songs to my mom. My mom felt so happy, and I was very happy, too.

【解析】

试题分析：这一篇记叙文，在写作记叙文时，一定要交待清楚记叙文的各大要素：who人物,what事件,when时间,where地点, why原因。本文要求叙述明天母亲节为妈妈制作水果沙拉的过程，注意要用第一人称，用一般过去时，要注意用陈述句，不要用祈使句。要写作中按事件发生的先后进行叙述，同时在文中要透露出自己对母亲的爱。

写作亮点：本文叙述清楚，按事件的先后为序，以first，then，after that……连词贯穿全文，层次明了。用take, wash, peel, cut into, put …on等动词（短语）的一般过去时，表达准确。结尾“My mom felt so happy, and I was very happy, too. ”妈妈感到高兴 ，我也非常高兴。点明主旨，母子互爱，溢于言表。