Question

【题目】 书面表达。

以How to Keep Healthy为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

How to Keep Healthy

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

How to Keep Healthy

If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food —— more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don’t feel well, you’d better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled water every day. It’s necessary for our health.

We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails or smoke, etc. It’s also very important.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍如何保持健康。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：If we want to ...，We should ...，you’d better....，It’s necessary for ...，We should not ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了要想保持健康必须有一个好习惯，接下来具体的介绍好习惯：早起早睡，多做锻炼，吃健康的食物，饭前要洗手，最后介绍我们不应该吸烟、留长指甲。此处用了want to do sth, get up, go to bed, at least, such as, and so on, had better,throw about等这些词组,也让文章增色不少。