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随着社会主义新农村的建设,我的家乡――泰兴发生了翻天覆地的变化,请以“My hometown”为题,根据以下信息,写一篇介绍家乡的短文。
位置
长江(the Changjiang River)以北
社会状况
1.人们勤劳、诚实,对彼此友好。
2.人们过着现代化的生活,吃得健康,穿的衣服时尚舒服,许多家庭拥有自己的小汽车。
3.在市区……(至少写两点);在乡村,鸟语花香,每年有成千上万的游客来欣赏乡村
美景。
4.孩子们可以受到好的教育。
5.以银杏(ginkgoes)而闻名
感想
希望家乡越来越美。
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要求:短文内容要包含以上信息,语句通顺,不少于80词。
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My Hometown
Tai Xing is my hometown. It is located in the north of the Changjiang River. It is famous for ginkgoes. People there are hard-working, honest and friendly. Children can get better education. Now they live a modern life. They eat healthily and wear many fashionable clothes. Many families even have their own cars. In the middle of the city, many high buildings are set up. The road is wide and the garden is beautiful. In the countryside, there are birds and flowers here and there. Thousands of visitors come here to enjoy the beauty of countryside every year. I hope my hometown become more and more beautiful. I am proud of my hometown.

试题分析:这篇短文要求我们介绍一下自己的家乡—泰兴。随着社会主义新农村的建设,我的家乡――泰兴发生了翻天覆地的变化,我们需要用正确的英语把这些变化表达出来。题目中有一个写作的提纲,我们可以按照提纲的要求,分成几个方面来叙述。首先是泰兴的地理位置和它以银杏而闻名;其次是泰兴的社会状况,风景如何,人怎么样等;最后是自己对家乡的感想。有些内容是需要我们自己补充的,如在泰兴市区是什么样的以及自己对家乡的感想。注意我们补充的内容要贴合实际,并且能跟上下文连贯起来。注意表达的层次性,不要杂乱无章。同时也要注意语句间的连接和表达的流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的短文。短文叙述完整,语意连贯,没有遗漏要点。作者在写作时,并不是完全按照表格中给出的顺序来介绍自己的家乡的。两个变化,一是他把第五条以银杏闻名提到了前面,这一点跟上句话结合的还是比较好的;另一个是他把孩子们能接受好的教育提前了,放在了家乡的人们的品质后面,这样的连接也比较合理。这样的变化使文章的内容更紧凑了,比较不错。文章中出现的比较好的句型有People there are hard-working, honest and friendly、Thousands of visitors come here to enjoy the beauty of countryside every year等。
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2)正确使用时态,语法正确,书写整洁。
3)80词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
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所写内容必须包括表格中的所有信息,省略号处需作适当的发挥;
开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;总词数不少于100;
不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Last week, our class had a class meeting on the topic of Cherish Water Resource. All the students took an active part in the discussion and shared their opinions with each other. We think
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In a word, water is very important to us. Each of us should do our best to cherish water resource so that people in the future will have plenty of water to use.

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