Question

【题目】书面表达。

目前，我国实施城市化进程中，给从乡村迁入城市的大多数孩子带来诸多的问题，特别在交朋友方面尤为突出。假如你是Know，你的朋友Tony发电子邮件请教你关于如何交朋友的问题，请你给他回复一封电子邮件提几点建议，词数约80左右。

要点如下：

1.在小区内玩耍时，你可以主动与他们交流成为新朋友，并告知家长；

2.请求父母带你去图书馆或一些公共场所，既可认识更多伙伴又可参加文体活动；

3.在周末，可外出参加各类活动等。

总之，多参加交流活动，克服困难，保持耐心。

要求：

1.涵盖所有要点，意思连贯，符合逻辑。

2.卷面整洁、书写规范工整。 作文的开头结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。

Dear Know,

I need some advice on how to make friends! I have just moved to a new city. I am 13. I don’t know anybody here and I want to make some friends. What’s the best way? Where can I meet people?

Yours,

Tony

Dear Tony,

There are lots of things you can do.

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I hope you will find a best friend soon!

Yours,

Know

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony,

There are lots of things you can do. First, you can ride your bike in your neighbourhood and try to find some kids. When you find some, you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some public places where there are lots of kids. You can take an art class or join a sports club. These are all great ways to meet people. Third, you can go out to take part in activities on Sundays. You can try making friends in them too. What’s more, try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself and don’t try so hard. It takes time and patience. I hope you will find a best friend soon!

Yours,

Know

【解析】

本文是一篇提纲作文，要求是以 how to make friends为主旨用英语写一篇短文，以电子邮件的方式呈现．这类话题是学生常见的话题，写起来较为简单，其要点主要为3小点，注意在文章中这3点必须都包括，除了这3点，还可以适当做出补充．由于是给别人提出一些建议，所以时态确定为一般现在时，人称根据文章的需要可确定为第二人称．重点短语及句型有：try to do sth，．You should…，What’s more…等及表示顺序的词，first，second， third等。