Question

2．随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用．我们身边的"低头族（phubber）"随处可见．请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息，以"Refuse to be phubbers"为题写一篇90词左右的短文．

要求：1．短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；2．题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：1．have effects on 对…有影响 2．concentrate on  聚焦于…
3．face-to-face conversation  4．make good use of 
Refuse to be phubbers
With the development of the Internet，smart-phones are widely used among people．Phubbers can be seen here and there．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Even worse，①when some people cross the street，they still ②concentrate on their mobile phones，③which can easily cause traffic accidents甚至更糟的是，当一些人过马路的时候他们仍然关注手机，那样很容易引起交通事故．
①when引导的是时间状语从句．
②concentrate on 专注于
③which引导的非限制定语从句，修饰前面的整个句子．
【高分句型二】
In my opinion，we'd better make good use of smart-phones依我看来，我们最好利用好手机．
had better do sth 最好做某事
make use of使用…

解答 Refuse to be phubbers
With the development of the Internet，smart-phones are widely used among people．Phubbers can be seen here and there．
While eating with family members or getting together with friends，some are always busy playing with their mobile phones．It has bad effects on the relationship with their relatives and friends．Even worse，when some people cross the street，they still concentrate on their mobile phones，which can easily cause traffic accidents．【高分句型一】It's too dangerous．And others stay up playing games．I think it is really bad for their health，work and study．（现象和弊端）
In my opinion，we'd better make good use of smart-phones．【高分句型二】Don't depend on them too much．And I do believe that face-to-face conversations will bring us more pleasure than chatting online．Let's raise our heads and refuse to be phubbers from now on!（观点）

点评 提纲类作文最重要的是要把所有的要点都包括在内，不能有遗漏或省略．本文所给要点不多，需要考生做较多的发挥，在写作时，注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更有文采．