Question

【题目】书面表达

根据下列表格提供的信息，运用所学的句型和短语，写一篇80词左右的短文，描述Lucy和Alice的异同。

Name	Lucy	Alice
Same	beautiful; like reading English every morning; hard-working
Differences	tall; thin	short; a little heavy
	creative	quiet and shy
	talent shows	comedies

Answer 1

【答案】

Lucy and Alice are good friends. They have a lot in common.They are both beautiful, and they both like reading English every morning and playing games. What’s more, they both work hard at school. They are hard-working.There are also differences between them. Lucy is tall and thin, but Alice is short and a little heavy. Lucy is more creative, but Alice is quieter and shyer than Lucy. Lucy likes talent shows best, but Alice’s favorite movies are comedies.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇给材料的作文，让学生根据表格中提供的信息，运用所学的句型和短语，写一篇80词左右的短文，描述Lucy和Alice的异同。。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：该文语句通顺，段落清晰，表达了题目所给出的各个要点。短文用了一些短语如：in common ，What’s more，work hard等等，增加了文章的色彩。