题目内容

写作(计20分)

养成良好的习惯对我们的学习生活有着很大的帮助。请根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文,发表在班级博客上。

良好的学习习惯

良好的生活习惯

益处

1.课前预习;

2.认真听讲;

3.独立作业。

1.健康饮食;

2.经常锻炼;

3.合理安排时间。

1.帮助我们更好地学习知识,提高技能;

2.使我们学会自我控制。

你的感受

……(请结合自身认识,至少给出一至两点感受)

要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;

2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥,不可简单翻译;

3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出的部分,不计入总词数);

4)不得使用真实姓名、校名等。

A Good Habit, a Successful School Life

A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.

 

 

 

 

A Good Habit, a Successful School Life

A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.

In our school life, we should prepare well for each lesson. In class, we must listen to the teacher carefully. Besides, it’s important for us to do our homework all by ourselves.

In our daily life, we ought to keep a healthy diet. Also, it’s necessary for us to exercise a lot and we should learn to make good use of our time.

In a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skills. We can learn to control ourselves if we have good habits.

I think good habits are really good for our mind and body. They lead us to success.

【解析】

试题分析:这篇文章要求我们以 A Good Habit, a Successful School Life为题写一篇作文。即好习惯,成功的学校生活。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲,主要包括三部分的内容。第一良好的学习习惯。从三方面进行阐述1.课前预习;2.认真听讲;3.独立作业。在写作的过程中要求写出自己的感受,可适当想象添加内容。第二良好的生活习惯。从三方面进行阐述:1.健康饮食;2.经常锻炼;3.合理安排时间。第三益处,从两个方面进行阐述。1.帮助我们更好地学习知识,提高技能;2.使我们学会自我控制。提纲虽然已经列好,但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者以总-分-总的格式讲述了好的学习,生活习惯,以及对我们的好处。层次非常的清晰。另外文中使用到的句式it’s important for us to do our homework all by ourselves.it’s necessary for us to exercise a lot .连接词Besides, In a word,Also等,短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。I think good habits are really good for our mind and body. They lead us to success. 内容贴合文章的需要。

考点:提纲类作文。

 

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Andy was born in China 17 years ago. In 2007, she went to the USA with her family. As a high school student, she has found many differences between Chinese and Americans:

About money

Americans like to spend more than they have, so many of them are always in debt(欠债). But Chinese usually spend less than they have, so many of them always have money left in the bank.

The American kids themselves make their own money. Most Chinese kids always ask their parents for money.

About education

Many American students have less homework to do while many Chinese students have much.

Many American girls take part in sports, dancing and singing groups while many Chinese girls take part in study groups.

Many American parents think there is no need to send their children to an expensive school. It’s different in China. Many Chinese parents would do anything to send their children to expensive schools though their family isn’t rich enough.

About friends

Most American parents let their sons or daughters make friends by themselves. They never ask them about their friends while Chinese parents usually enjoy knowing more about their children’s friends in many different ways, and usually stop them from staying out too late with friends.

1. between Chinese and Americans

 

Chinese

Americans

Money

Chinese usually have some money in the bank2. they spend less money than they have.

Many Americans usually 3.

money from the banks because they spend more than they have.

Chinese children get money from their4. .

Children usually make money by 5. .

Education

Parents usually do their6.

to send their children to study in expensive schools.

Many parents think it isn’t7.

to send their children to an expensive schools.

Chinese girls join in8.

groups.

Many girls exercise, dance and sing together.

Friends

Parents are usually9. in knowing more about their children’s friends.

Most American parents pay10.

attention to their children’s friends.

 

 

You like rats? You must be kidding. Everyone hates rats. But rats may soon be man’s new good friend.

What happens after an earthquake? We send in rescue (营救,救援) dogs. Why? Because they can smell people. Dogs save lives. They help rescuers to find living people. But dogs are big and they can’t get into small spaces. So now a new research project is using a smaller animal to save lives: the rat.

How does it work? First, the rat is trained to smell people. When this happens, the rat’s brain gives a signal. This is sent to a small radio on its back, and then the rescuers follow the radio signals. When the rat’s brain activity jumps, the rescuers know that someone is alive. The rat has smelled that person.

Although there are already robots which can do this job, rats are better. “Robots’ noses don’t work well when there are other smells around. Rats are good at that.” Rats can also see in the dark, they are cheaper and quicker to train than dogs, and unlike robots, they don’t need electricity!

The “rat project” is not finished, but a scientist says, “It would be great. A rat could get into spaces we couldn’t get to, and a rat would get out if it wasn’t safe.” Perhaps for the first time in history, people will be happy to see a rat in a building (but only after an earthquake, of course).

1.Where do you think you can find this passage.

A. In a magazine about toys. B. In a history book.

C. In a newspaper about science. D. In an advertisement.

2.In the writer’s opinion, rats may become man’s new friend because ________.

A. they can be food for people

B. they are lovely

C. they can completely replace man’s rescue jobs

D. they can help rescue people after an earthquake

3.Which of the following is NOT true?

A. Rats don’t need electricity.

B. Rats are better than robots when smelling.

C. Rats are as clever as radios.

D. Rats can see things in the dark when doing rescues.

4.Which is the best title of this passage?

A. Ways of saving people B. Rats

C. Rescue dogs D. Rats for rescue

 

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